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Monday, December 22, 2008

A Song I Wrote...

Sometimes you feel so cold...
Sometimes you feel so alone...
There's no one here...
So cold... so alone....

I feel so sick...
I feel so broken...
Nobody can fix me....
So sick... so broken....

I'm so scared...
I'm so frightened...
That you'll hurt me...
So scared... so frightened...

You're all I need...
All I'll ever have...
That's you...
oh... you.

6 comments:

Anonymous said...

The lyrics of the song sort of display an emotion which I never knew of you, of all people to possess. Care to explain?
Is this a song, or a poem? Does this to prove you to be a lyricist, a poet or a songwriter?

Daniel Ting said...

Nah...
I'm never a lyricist, poet nor songwriter.

I just write what I feel...
sometimes in poem or song form...

Anonymous said...

you sound sad..

Daniel Ting said...

lol...
yeah...
it's a sad song...
what do you expect me to be?
happy?

Anonymous said...

So, you wrote what you felt at that time...
What were you feeling, or - please don't get mad - to whom were you're feelings directed to? It looks quite obvious.
You didn't excatly answer Anonymous' question. Does this song have a melody?

Daniel Ting said...

nah...
no melody...
it did have when i first write it...
but... after awhile...
i tend to forget the melody...